Multiple Drafts

Draft One.

Dear Marion Jones,

I like you. If you met me you would like me, too. Want to meet me?

Love,
Alana Devich

Draft Two.

Dear Marion,

You know the part of a girl's armpit? The part where--if her arm is down and resting against the side of her body--those little folds and creases appear? That part of the armpit? Yours is really nice.

Thanks for your time,
Alana


Draft Three.

Dear Marion

My friend Anne says that she could probably bounce a penny off your abs. Maybe you and I could get together and figure out what I can do with your abs.

Call me?
Alana